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01. Graveyard

 

Darkness. A lone piano plays a tune lost in memory.

 

Very dim light. A graveyard. Thousands of gravestones. Each grave is formed by a crouching dancer, with grave-like sheets covering them, breathing, heaving and alive as if under volcanic movements.

 

A woman in her seventies enters. She is wearing a wedding dress. It is disheveled, dirty and torn. She is holding some flowers for the dead. She wears heavy, clown-like make-up that is melting on her face. She looks exhausted and disoriented as if just come out of a shock.

 

She starts to search for the gravestone where she wants to put her flowers.

 

None of them seem to be the right one. She interacts/dances with each grave she encounters. Maybe she begins to put her flowers on the grave when the grave reacts like a fierce animal. Or she whispers to the grave but the grave replies with unfamiliar movement/noises. She moves onto the next grave. She goes over dozens of graves, and dances a slow and heart-breaking dance with each one. She becomes more and more helpless, more and more desperate, until she starts crying. She finally slows down. Music changes to a clean aria. She makes a few more attempts to search for the right grave. Then she gives up, standing among the sea of graves.

 

She stares and stares and stares and stares. Finally, she burns her flowers. The aria ends.

VESUVIUS

A Concept for Choreography

Full Text - by Mori

*Note on staging: The director/choreographer is free to use any viable way to realize this play’s concepts. Don’t worry too much about making it look magnificent and flawless. Minimal scenery works and stagehands can be employed, while the images should still be striking and the magic astonishing.

02. Threshold

 

All the lights go out except a beam of light on the solitary, disheveled, broken-down old lady. Music suggestion: Radiohead’s “Motion Picture Soundtrack,” or some very solemn, requiem-like music with male bass choir singing, that suggests the will to renounce and part with this life.She stands for a while; until a doorframe appears. Beyond the doorframe is complete darkness.We hear a strong lonely wind blowing. And a very deep voice starts to recite Turgenev’s poem in Russian and/or in English under the requiem:

 

VOICE:

"You, who wishes to step over this threshold, do you know what awaits you?"

"I know," answers the girl."Cold, hunger, hatred, derision, contempt, abuse, prison, sickness, and maybe even death?"

"I know."

"Complete alienation, loneliness?"

"I know. I am ready. I shall endure all sufferings, all blows."

"And not from your enemies alone, but from your family and friends?"

"Yes. Even from them."

"Good. Are you ready to sacrifice yourself?"

"Yes."

"As a nameless sacrifice? You will perish, and no one, no one will even know whose memory they should honor?"

"I need neither gratitude, nor any pity. I do not need a name."

"Do you understand," it finally asked, "that you may become disillusioned in what you believe now, perhaps realize that you made a mistake, and that you ruined your young life?"

"I know that too, and I still want to enter."

"Then enter:"

The girl stepped over the threshold and a heavy curtain fell behind her.

"Fool," someone said from behind.

"Saint." Someone replied. 

 

The poem is read slowly, or it can be read by a Stephen Hawking electronic voice. Or it can be in spoken in Russian, Latin, or even a fabricated language with subtitles. It is important, though, that the poem be understood.

 

A very faint, different color of light, maybe red, shows the silhouettes of the grave-people, who are slowly coming alive. Under the song, a ritual begins. They fetch water, lots of water. They gently pour water on her head and with the help of others, she removes her make-up, and walks out from her wedding dress. Water drinking ceremony. Others feed water to her. River of Forgetfulness. Many of them drink the water with her in unified movement.

 

After they’re done, she takes a deep breath, and steps over to the other side of the threshold.The step incurs a drastic light change, which neither brightens up nor dims down: just a drastic change.She lies down in a fetus position; and the grave-people cover her up with the sheets that they used to cover themselves for making graves. Lights slowly fade to complete darkness. The Requiem ends. Or if it’s Radiohead’s song being used, the music ends here with the lyric: “I will see you in the next life.”

 

Silence for a long, long while. Repose. There can be little creaking sounds of old movie reeling before the complete silence.

03. The World of Colors

 

The sound of the universe first forming.

A cigarette lighter is lit in the dark.

As the small flame steadily burns, a classic male American voice, unclear, as if under radio interference counts down as music builds up slowly.

 

VOICE: 10. 9. The ignition sequence starts. 6. 5. 4.3. 2, 1, loose to ignition, and LIFT OFF!

 

On cue, a pipe is lit by the cigarette lighter then Music and Lights explode, revealing a completely different world: glaring white, hospital white – a canvas to be messed with. Festive, lively music of first birth. Lights reveal the man holding the cigarette lighter is a very old and very wise-looking craftsman in overalls and a painter’s beret.

 

From the pile of grave-sheets that originally covered the old woman, a young, small female dancer (the protagonist) springs out.

 

All other dancers come to life as well. Each of them is wrapped in pink, filmy membranes. They spring out from their membranes. All the babies are born into this world without color.

 

The stage gives the impression of a store, or a world, with all kinds of colors to sell, like a candy shop with colorful walls of jellybeans. Piles and piles of paint stack up in the walls, bold, wild and bewildering. The craftsman gives colors to the dancers to splash on themselves and others. Or, as the old craftsman makes a commanding movement, we can have thousands of placentas descending from the sky. Placentas of all colors: blood red, dark magenta, blue, yellow, chocolate brown, sapphire, emerald, indigo, the color of quiet lonely lakes at sunset, the color of the eyes of the cats, the color of stars in the night sky, the color of the fire in primeval forests, realistic and complete with umbilical cords, very bloody and very gross. The dancers choose their own placentas, as if plucking their own stars from the sky. When they have chosen one, they stand underneath it, and then ring the bell (sound effect). The old craftsman goes to whoever rings the bell, put the umbilical cords around the selector, and squeezes the placenta, which breaks and all the color seeps through the entire body of the selector, like vendors pouring colorful syrups on top of the shredded ice in a children’s street fair. The game intensifies until it becomes like a body-painting show, which takes place slowly but gradually becomes vigorous.

 

The colorful crowd roams the stage while the protagonist, throughout the process, stands out as awkward and out of place. She is fascinated by all the colors, trying to touch them, but also very afraid of all them. Occasionally it seems that she is almost about to choose a color, but somebody is faster than she is. Or she just thinks better of it. When the color explodes, she protects herself, like a frightened animal, from being tainted with a white umbrella.

 

All the colors are used up. All the people become colorful except for her – she is the only one that stays pure-white. The old craftsman looks at her with solemn eyes. He gives her a knife. She accepts it with questioning eyes. He leaves, but right before leaving, he makes a gesture.

 

04. Expansion

 

On the gesture, music changes. Suggestion: Difang’s “Visiting Song” from “Circle of Life.” All the dancers seem to hear an awakening call. Their walking pattern suddenly switches into a more orderly and organized form. They begin to breathe and heave according to the rhythm of the music. (In this scene and the next, during the quieter moments, we hear very small sound of clock ticking.) And then they begin to do the following series of movements, with several music transitions in between. During the actions, they try to drag the female protagonist into them. She is curious and fascinated by the actions and tries to imitate them, but does so poorly. Besides, she is visually awkward because she is the only colorless one. Gradually, the intensity and speed of the actions become more and more unbearable and frightening to her. She protects herself with the umbrella occasionally, and more and more towards the end.

 

The collective actions of the dancers are:

  • They gather food.

  • They divide into separate groups of men and women.

  • The men begin to hunt. The women gather food and take care of babies.

  • The men come home. They make knifes, potteries, make necklaces.

  • They sow, plow fields and reap.​

 

Music Changes.

  • One man sees something far away. He points at it. The crowd gathers around him, all of them in awe by the wonder on the other side. They fetch a telescope (can be mimed or real). They become sailors. They sail in a crazy sea, lurching wildly, some vomiting, and finally getting to another side. During the process, the protagonist is at the very far end of the crowd and doesn’t know what is going on. But afraid of being alone, she also tries to join the crowd in this voyage. She is bewildered. This voyage is excruciating for her.

  • War Occurs.

The music builds up and gradually spins out of control. The protagonist becomes more and more confused and frightened. Her resistance becomes more and more desperate.

  • All the people type away ceaselessly on electronic devices.

  • People bring out big, bright laptops (or some iconic latest electronic devices with wild provocative colors,) generating some kind of visible elements that eventually swallows them up and drown them (maybe the electronic devices are like ribbon sprays, or generate something string-like – that signifies the words we’ve typed, the signals we’ve sent, the paper we’ve printed out, or the chords of those appliances, which are purveyed endlessly from backstage - to tie up all the performers like making cotton candies with sugar strings – a sweet and colorful entanglement. The things they generate are going to gradually form a heap that looks like a small volcano in which most dancers are eventually buried.) Music segues into a piece that is consisted of little sound effects of skype message alerts, iPhone alerts, Mac e-mail alerts, subway beepings, etc. that builds up from sporadic sounds to full and festive music that makes you want to dance. There can be an element of nostalgic melody if it could work.The protagonist, again and again, gets herself out of all the mess – escapes from all the strings, protects herself with her umbrella, etc. And, as if foreseeing that all this change is going to spin into an irretrievable chaos, she tries to “rescue” people from this deadly entanglement but fails.

 

​While the expansion scene is going on in the background, people speak (can be spoken by two dancers or played as pre-recorded sounds). Things like:

 

Woman: An organism doesn’t have to be something that moves, right?

Man: Right. Something can be perfectly still and still be an organism. A plant is also an organism. And it doesn’t move.

Woman: And a stone?

Man: A stone is not.

Woman: So what differentiates an organism from non-organisms?

Man: An organism is something that is alive.

Woman: I think, anything that has self-consciousness is an organism.

Man: Self-consciousness?

Woman: Yeah. Self-consciousness. Like, an awareness of itself.

Man: Self-consciousness only happens when something is alive. And when it’s alive it’s an organism.

Woman: Sperms are also organisms.

Man: What?

Woman: Sperms. They are also organisms.

Man: Why?

Woman: They are alive!

Man: No they’re not.

Woman: They are. And they know what they want! They have a purpose! In their motion! They want an egg!

Man: You know. Sperms are not organisms.

Woman: That’s not fair!

Man: What’s not fair? They’re not alive. They just can’t help moving. You see, like your heart. It is beating. Or the river. It is moving, but it is not alive by itself.

Woman: Sperms are self-conscious of their movement.

Man: Sperms are not self-conscious. They just move. They have no idea what an egg is. They don’t know what they’re looking for. They just move like crazy, like magnets towards metal, you know? And then, Bam! There’s an egg. And they got stuck.

Woman: Like an accident?

Man: Yeah like an accident.

Woman: So. We are all accidents.

Man: You’re right. (beat) Look, things that are alive can grow, and get bigger, and multiply themselves. Sperms can’t.

Woman: (dreamily) Sperms can multiply!…

Man: Sperms can multiply? You mean a sperm can marry a sperm and give birth to little sperms?

Woman: But they move!

Man: (freaking out) Moving doesn’t make them alive!

Woman: Then why do we move?

Man: I don’t know!!!

 

These can be the voices of a little boy and a little girl. They can start playing games in which they kill each other with machine guns. Or if these are spoken by adults, music washes over their conversation. Or the lines “why do we move?” “I don’t know” can recur as part of music.

 

  • Sigmund Freud can appear (can be an actor who looks like Freud or a man wearing a Freud mask). The chaotic, deadly technology dance goes on.

  • A electronic voice can cut in occasionally and recite things like: “y1 = y z1 = z,” “x1 = x - vt y1 = y z1 = z t1 = t,” and then “E=mc².”

  • The heap of the volcano starts to form. All the dancers get tangled and buried up by the heap/mountain of strings/ ropes/ cords that they have generated and the protagonist gets thrust out of the volcano again and again like a piece of unwanted rock. She is still trying to rescue people out of this mess to no avail. People are either too tangled or simply unwilling to get out. Finally she has to give up. All the people are buried, struggling. She stands on top of the volcanic heap. And then the volcano also spewed out a bundle. Music slows down, as if the battery is low. She stares at the bundle in stupor, unmoving while the reveling crowd struggles and twitches in their entanglement until they are finally dead and still. The girl stands alone for a long time.

 

Music of solitude. Maybe “Motion Picture Soundtrack” can come back again. Lights on the dancing crowd begin to dim. The following two things are choreographed to happen simultaneously and end together:

 

  1. She continues to look at the bundle, and looks at the umbrella she carries as if she has never noticed it before. She plays with it. She discovers that it can be used as a walking stick. She takes a last glance at the volcano and the dead people buried inside, sinking into deep sorrow. She takes out the knife the craftsman has given her (as if she has forgotten it is there). She cuts herself in the abdomen. Red blood spurts out and stains her dress. And then she cuts another part of herself. Another red stain. Another cut, but this time, green, or other color spreads. Another cut, another color, another cut, another color, until her dress becomes a beautiful, daintily-colorful piece. She does this in completely dignified silence, like a martyr. When she’s finished, she takes up the walking stick and bundle, and begins her journey.

  2. A thousand people (silently and very slowly getting out of the volcano, gracefully as ghosts) whisper quietly on their smart phones, and then they hang their phones on a tree, and all lean on the tree and make a wish.

The scene ends. Lights out on the dancers. The female protagonist is alone on stage.

 

05. The Journey

 

She commenses a journey, on her umbrella walking stick, very slowly, in spiraling circles, in a stylized ritualistic way like a noh-player. Subtle music or no music at all. When she just starts walking, stagehands (or the dancers) start walking in. They clean up ALL THE MESS so she embarks on this journey on a pure-white stage with as much time and dignity as she wants to take. While the stagehands are cleaning up the stage, we hear the [1]conversation in the background with the sound quality of a tape-recording:

 

(Voices of a young couple just waking up)

 

Husband:   Hi.

 

Wife:   Morning.

 

Husband:   Get up. Get up. Get up.

 

Wife:   Go away! Would you go warm up the coffee, please?

 

Husband:   Sure.

 

Wife:   Oh wait wait.

 

Husband:   What?

 

Wife:   We’re out of coffee. Yesterday.

 

Husband:   Oh we’ve got extra packs. I know where they are. Wait here. I’ll go get them.

 

 

(Sound of Door opening, then closing.)

(The volume of music rises and then falls)

(Voices of a couple just waking up)

 

 

Husband:   Hi.

 

Wife:   Morning.

 

Husband:   Get up. Get up. Get up.

 

Wife:   Go away! Would you go warm up the coffee please?

 

Husband:   We’re out of coffee.

 

Wife:   Oh. No.

 

Husband:   But look what I found. A blender.

 

Wife:  (Really surprised) Wow!

 

Husband:   We’ll blend something for breakfast. I’ll go see what we’ve got in the fridge.

 

(Sound of Door Opening, then closing.)

(The volume of music rises and falls)

(Voices of a couple just waking up)

 

Husband:   Hi.

 

Wife:   Morning.

 

Husband:   Get up. Get up. Get up.

 

Wife:   Go away! Would you go warm up the coffee please?

 

Husband:   (briskly) Honey, we are out of coffee. But we have a blender. We are going to blend some celeries, some carrots and some apples.

 

Wife:   Oh really?

 

Husband:   Do you know what I’m going to make you this morning?

 

Wife:   No. I don’t know.

 

Husband:   I’m going to make juice blend.

 

Wife:   Blend what?

 

Husband:   I’m gonna blend celeries, carrots and apples. You’ll love it.

 

(Sound of Door Opening, then closing.)

(The volume of music rises and falls under the small, faraway noise of a blender)

(Voices of a couple just waking up)

 

Husband:   Hi.

 

Wife: Morning.

 

Husband:  Get up. Get up. Get up. Look! I made fresh blended juice!

 

Wife:  Wow!

 

Husband:  Try it. Is it good?

 

Wife:  It’s very good.

 

Husband:  Look what I also found. Your diary.

 

Wife:  Diary?

 

Husband:  Yes. It’s beautiful. Do you want to read it?

 

Wife:  What is this?

 

Husband:  This is your diary. This is a date. You wrote it.

 

Wife:  Date. What is the date today?

 

Husband:  Today? It’s January thirty first.

 

Wife:  January thirty first. I suddenly realized I have for a long time forgotten who I was. So the only thing I could do was …

 

Husband:  Burying.

 

Wife:  … burying myself in a bookstore, and have encounters with books after books after books, books written...

 

Husband:  By others

 

Wife:  Books written by others, books written by myself, so that I can meet with myself again, and again. So that I can piece myself together with the shimmering pieces. Piece by piece. And then I suddenly saw:

 

Husband:  And then I suddenly saw:

 

Wife:  that the world around me was a giant blender! I am a piece of vegetable, a stick of celery. A piece of carrot…

 

Husband:  and apple.

 

Wife:   And apple.

 

Husband:   Honey?

 

Wife:   Hmm?

 

Husband:   We’re out of coffee.

 

Wife:   Oh No.

 

Husband:   (Happily) But now we have a blender!


Wife:   (Happily) Oh really!

 

End of tape-recording. She continues to take the journey on the walking stick in complete silence and slow motion, on a now completely empty stage. Nothing happens. Just her, taking this journey. There can be strong wind for her to fight against but the journey should be as lonely and uneventful as possible. It should be long enough for the audience to feel just a little antsy. 

 

It becomes night. We hear crickets.

 

She takes out an imaginary telephone. She listens to it. A voice over (with sound quality of the telephone):

 

Voice: And then she forgets. She turns the key but the door will not open. The Universe keeps expanding and things start to slip away in her. Now she is lying there in the hospital bed. And then one day she said she couldn’t find her husband’s grave. She forgot which gravestone it was. She forgot her way home. She burned dinner. She couldn’t drive anymore. She got into an accident and now she is in hospital. What is your name, the doctor asked her. She said her name. Where do you live? She said the name of our city. What is your telephone number? What is the date today? What time is it now? She tried her best. In the hospital, I practice with her. I practice with my mother how to draw a clock. She is there. Lying in the hospital bed. I said, let’s learn how to draw a clock! And I would teach her to draw a circle; I helped her hold the pen while she was drawing it. Her hand in mine. Or we would make a circle with stones in an empty field, and pretend that it’s a clock. I am the long hand, and she is the short hand. We’d play a game. I’d say, three thirty; And we’d try to go to the right position. But slowly she becomes afraid of time. She doesn’t know where to go, she said. So I say to her, let’s forget about the time games. In the circle we started staging talent shows. There is no time in the circle. It’s okay that you can’t find dad’s grave. What time is it? She’d ask me. It’s time to go to bed, mom. Is it story time? Yes. It is story time.

 

We hear the sound of telephone hung up and hollow dial tone. The protagonist puts down the imaginary phone.

 

She lies down in a fetus position. Repose.

Lights slowly fade to complete darkness. The wind blows. Silence. 

 

06. The Volcano

 

Lights come up slowly. The protagonist is gone. We see the mouth of a volcano that glares and roars with rage.

 

This fragment is done in a Jacque Lecoq or clown-like style. She sees the ugliest man in the world. The man is a sad clown, a banished one. There is something about him, maybe his expression, maybe posture, or movement, that is suggestive of wounds. He wears tragic clown-like make-up and looks messed-up. But in a way there is something similar or harmonious between him and her. He guards the mouth of the volcano with his truncheon, controlling an invisible traffic. He has been guarding this volcano for 3,470,347,099 years. He is constantly hurting himself in the process, for example, his arm gets strained or his hair tangled, or lazzi of that kind.

 

 

When the male clown sees her, he violently blows his whistle and signs her to back off.

 

She tries to approach him several times, but he is making it clear that this is not the place to stay.

 

She sits down. She takes out her handkerchief from her cloth-bundle, takes out her water bottle and dips the handkerchief into it, trying to relax. He comes up and tries to dismiss her.

 

She looks at him with wonder and interest, and then suddenly, puts her wet handkerchief on his forehead.

 

He stops all his movement. They remain still in this position for a while. And then the woman slowly disentangles the man’s hair, massages his weary arm, etc, and then guides him to sit down.

 

They sit for a while. Soon they begin to play with each other. First just little friendly pokes, then she leads him into funnier games. A smile emerges from the sad clown’s make-up. His face begins to blossom.

 

Then he begins to show her around the volcano.

 

At first, every little spurt excites them. They admire at the beauty of it. Then he shows her another funny game: he puts his finger into the volcano and withdraws, showing her his glowing finger, thrilled. She is impressed and overjoyed. He happily encourages her to try. She refuses at first and then decides to be bolder. She pokes both her hands into the volcano. She’s overcome by pain. She withdraws with her hands both shriveled. She weeps.

 

He is stunned. He tries all possible ways to restore her hand: water from her bottle, handkerchief… all in vain. Finally she stops the panic and, her hands in his, smiles at him through her tears. He smiles back. They hold each other’s hands and smile until her painful tremble completely subsides. Their faces are lit up again. They begin to dance and play around with joy. He pulls out from a wooden trunk the same wedding dress that the old lady in the first scene wears. Both of them are thrilled. Ceremoniously, with solemnity, he helps the woman put on her wedding dress. He magically conjures up some flowers – red flowers like the flowers in the first scene, which she now holds solemnly. He takes out some make-up from the trunk and puts them on her face in exactly the clown-like way the 70-year-old woman wore in the first scene. Now they both have make-up on their faces. They dance a giddy dance. In his ecstasy, the man throws his wooden trunk into the volcano.

 

As soon as the wooden trunk is thrown in, the volcano’s activity becomes more and more vehement. He tries to hug her and protect her. But she, seeing the coming danger, begins to be really afraid, pulls away from him, trying to escape him.

 

The fire becomes too great for either of them to move. She blows his whistle to call for help, a loud, horrible whistle. At the last moment, the fire surges over. Seeing this, he conjures up a grave-stone sheet like those in the first scene. They hold on to each other until they’re swallowed by the flame. They smile at each other before

 

Lights fade.

End Note: Vesuvius is dedicated to my mother, whose full courage I will forever try to perpetuate.

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